Welcome to recording. And gearslutz.
Anyway i highly recommend against opening your debut album with a lofi section. Especially one that sounds bad. Honestly, if I wasn't trying to make you feel better I would have shut it off after 5 seconds of that awful lofi thing, thinking that's how good the rest of the recording actually is.
It is a little better than that but you have quite a ways to go. It's fun to learn!
