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Originally Posted by dylansmale  doesn't seem like anything innovative or new, but the fact that the singer is a female is a plus sign in the industry I'm guessing. The vocals though, are unmoving, but familiar sounding. They seem to lack heart and any emotion what so ever, except for a girl trying to sound like a temptress but not being motivated for the part and being the slave of some sick act (seriously thats what crosses my mind second or third). Not only that but the tune has been beaten to death by other artists. Other than that, I find it catchy and pretty well recorded.
Guitar is blah, but I guess it fits well with what your going for. Not enough emphasis on the drums I'm thinking. |
Well, based on mdme_sadie and peeders's valuable and essentially constructive (plus a priceless reality check thanks soooo much guys) advice I've scheduled a drummer, pianist and bass player to replace the midi stuff, and will be adding a short sax solo as well as losing the rap interlude and will be shortening the song, tailor some space around the vocal, prune and compress the harmonies,as well as possibly a key change.
However your comment that the song has been beaten to death by other artists is in a way a compliment because this is not a cover.