I like it too.
I'm only listening thru cheap speakers, but it sounds good to me.
I like how the vocal is so upfront almost whispering and the percussion/bass fills in nicely. For some reason the
first "go" seems not quite right and there is a high note in the bridge that doesn't seem to hit right either.
Other then that, I like the style and sound of the song; maybe a better/quicker ending...but now I'm just getting picky.
Great job!
edit: now that I've listened to it again, the high in the bridge sounds ok, don't know why it hit me wrong the first time around. Might of been the snare robbing the vocal some...not sure.