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Originally Posted by mikelang  Pretty shallow lyrics, just fun and frivolously in love type stuff.
Please tear it apart and give me your thoughts and constructive critcism/feedback. Thanks! |
Overall, I like it, quite accessible, nice bass sound. My main criticism would be:
1) the vocal rhythm/meter and the melody in the bridge/prechorus isn't very different from the chorus, that kinda makes it harder to set the chorus apart.
2) I'd have stacked about 10 background vocal tracks in the chorus, to make it sound a lot bigger. When you sing "breathing on my skin" in the prechorus, there is a nice backing panned L/R and then you go back to a one voice chorus, which feel anti-climatic to me.
3) I'd play around with little effects on the vocals in the verses just to make it sound more interesting throughout.
Good work overall! Hope this helps!