| Nice work. Decent production and mixing, I must say. Dude, with what you're working with, from a vocal perspective I think you've got WAY more out of those pieces of gear than anyone could hope for. Anything else you try to do with what you have is going to be overproducing or overmixing IMO. My only comment would be I would add some kind of cymbal swell/reverse cymbal or small crash at the end of every 4 bars to make the hooks distinctive and to keep the verses from becoming mundance. Just a little sprinkles of accents to keep the listener's attention. Additionally, I might add another track of some light guitar licks over top of the whole note strums you already have to keep things moving and interesting. Again, that's just me. It's your track and you know what they say about opinions. Other than that, I think you nailed it. Especially good job of sound management with drums and giving everything its own space. Alot of that has to do with the arrangement, as opposed to mixing. Good job and good luck on this one. |