I guess I will chime in:
Ditto on the hollow snare hotter
Ditto on the snare popping more
Ditto on the vocal in the front
I would roll the over heads at about 12k and over to give it that 'record' sound.
The bass and the kick are close in working together but I think there is to much lowend when they are combined. Try rolling off the bass at around 60 or even 70hz allowing the kick to do that work but then the bass to work the top end.
The song is very good and unique - it just doesn't sound like a record, it sounds like a good demo. Try taking it up a few more notches to give it some punch.
I would love to take a crack at mixing this song would be great fun. Let me know if you'd like to take me up on that.
clking@creativesoundimages.com
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